my first ever attempt at poetry. wrote it in about a minute. the idea came in the loo, i rush out, write everything and then set it up in proper order. don't know where the idea came from but it was like a lightening. thought i'd work on it, refine it but i'm letting it be the way it came.
here it goes.
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when i fall, i rise,
when he falls, and fall he shall, he lifts everyone with him.
i take people to the verge of heaven,
his is the heaven and all earth.
i have a reason,
he has a cause.
i live either in the past or future,
he breathes this moment.
i want to win,
he wants to play.
i learn the game,
he learns from the game.
i'm on people's tongues,
he's in their 'earts.
i think,
he feels.
i'm a mere mortal,
his quest is for immortality.
and finally, i die a man,
he lives on a god.
that, my friend, is the difference
between a winner and a loser.
10 comments:
i love the poem!
but why do you refer to the loser as 'I'??
don't know. started off like that i s'pose. like i said, didn't want to meddle with it too much.
it's beautiful...
rofl! is it? thanks.
Too good... The best i read after ROBERT FROST.. truly beautiful
sxi undi mama
;)..thanks babai.
nice one raa adi...
babai! comment kuda chestava?..intlo net ochindi gaa, kummai
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